www- You have a nice picture, which represents a college magazine very well. Target- It would be good if you change font because it quite hard to read on Cover page (College magazine)
on 09/12/16
Your magazine cover and contents page plan looks decent. in order to make it look better, i suggest you work on it and add more special magazine features like mentioned above in sopna's comment. on Rough Magazine...
on 28/11/16
Front cover lacks other features such as sub-headlines, a barcode or a puff. Your DPS shows good use of language to show the youth and enthusiasm of the artist and also represents the genre well. on Rough Magazine...
on 28/11/16
These are the comments I received for my college magazine (preliminary task), looking at these I realised that I needed to embed more magazine features such as coverlines, skyline, barcode etc. I also found that my general house style needed more work. For example, the font and style wasn't consistent and needed more focus on. I also felt as if the layout wasn't that professional and should have been laid out differently. This also was relevant to my rough music magazine.
I also gathered good aspects from these comment, which are that my image that I took of my cover star was good, I also had good language to represent the genre and it represented my age group well.
I found from this that the house style had improved and I had linked my colours well. It also consistently worked throughout my magazine and looked compatible with my target audience.
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